THIS WAS THE POEM I WAS TRYING TO WRITE:
I lye in bed and look at the moon.
A beatiful shape in the sky.
I've heard it reflects the sun's light like a glowing mirror in the dark.
So as I fall into the velvet sheet of sleep I am on the moon instead
I hope you liked it. It didn't realy make it rhyme, but instead I let it evolve into that. Also. . . . sorry about that totaly random word just sitting there:)
1 comment:
"I fall into the velvet sheet of sleep"
I love that line!
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